Posts Tagged ‘media pitches’

A Pitch to Ditch

Friday, October 1st, 2010

A timely topic these days involving children is bullying. Stories of bullying leading to tragic circumstances seem to be appearing on a regular basis across the country. This is an important issue and many experts, from many different points of view, could address it.

A recent email pitching bullying experts to the media missed the mark. After introducing the experts in the first few lines, paragraphs 2, 3 and 4 were quotes from those experts. Then came some background information, which explained the experts worked in four areas in the Northeast. (I read the pitch after it was made to someone in Arizona.) The pitch went on for a total of 18 paragraphs.

Where’s the compelling story about the parents whose child was bullied? If you offer the media that, you wouldn’t need three paragraphs of quotes to persuade a journalist to put the experts on air. If you explained how these experts assisted these parents through a difficult time they never expected when deciding to have children, someone wouldn’t need to type out 18 paragraphs most media won’t finish if they get past paragraph two. And if these experts are well-established leaders in their industry in states in the Northeast, why spend time pitching them to journalists in the Southwest? If there’s a good reason to do so, then spell it out.

There’s actually lots to talk about on bullying, especially with how social media, texting and the internet make it easier and more complicated. PR pros have a solid opportunity to pitch a client plus address a key issue important to families. So why slap together something that likely won’t get the job done? If these experts really have something important to share, why should we miss out on that because of a pitch that should be ditched?

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PR Mike! You just hit a bullseye!

Thursday, September 2nd, 2010

Story IdeaI often write about poor PR pitches to the media. So let’s discuss one that got the job done for the reporter, PR firm and firm’s client.

Mike is from a New Jersey PR firm. He addressed the reporter by name. He started his pitch with a short paragraph not about his client but about a victim. Mike wrote as if he were telling a story, a short story about a man who lost a lot of money.

“Personally, I try to tell a story in all my pitches,” Mike said. “I try to keep it short & interesting to help build a picture. I’ve heard horror stories from media outlets about off target, incoherent pitches so I always aim to give a clear understanding of the pitch. Before I send a pitch out, I read and think, would I be interested in this? Would this pitch sell me? It’s a good practice and not time consuming at all!”

Ok. So far so good. But is this victim living in the reporter’s market or is his home on the other side of the planet? In the second paragraph of Mike’s pitch, he explained the victim is based in the reporter’s area. Then he wrote the company playing the role of expert (his client) is also in town.

“I try to make it easy for everyone involved,” Mike added in a follow-up email.

Maybe too easy, the reporter wondered. Then Mr. Media thought “Ah ha! I know what must be wrong!” Maybe Mike was having all the media in town telling this story and interviewing his client.

Nope. Mike did not disappoint.

He said: “I handle that with honesty, especially with TV. Once I receive an acknowledgement and confirmation, that station gets the exclusive. First come first serve in my book!”

The pitch written by Mike from New Jersey is two paragraphs. It is 155 words. And perhaps the most important stat:  A TV crew shot the story just two days later.

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Judging a PR Pro by a Cover

Tuesday, August 31st, 2010

Book PagesA New York publicist mails a client’s book to a reporter across the country. The package includes a slick brochure. The reporter recognizes the publicist’s name but doesn’t recall her giving him a heads up the book was on its way. He flips through the book, stops momentarily to check out some bullet points on a page and wonders if his wife might find it interesting. He puts the book on his desk and throws away the brochure.

The book doesn’t relate to any particular issues the reporter covers. He doesn’t recognize the authors. There’s no obvious connection to the reporter’s community. If the package included a personal letter to the reporter, he never saw it. But the trash did.

I’ve talked before here about PR pros not simply pitching media like throwing darts. But it’s not uncommon for publicists to mail out clients’ books without much direction. And because we’re not talking about email, I wonder what it costs to mail 250 pages to many members of the media across the country. Maybe some of the media are specifically targeted and care about what the author says. But often, it does seem like someone is throwing darts.

At one point, a bunch of these books covered a strip of wood that separated desks at my husband’s TV station. Consider it a library of randomness. But somewhere out there, a client put a lot of work into writing those pages. And somewhere out there, a publicist is trying to make that client successful.

My recommendations:

  • In addition to the author, find someone before contacting media that journalists can interview who can share a personal story. Find a different personal story for each different city. Searching for people on Twitter can help.
  • Decide if you’re willing to fly your client into cities for interviews. Satellite and Skype interviews are possible but often look blah.
  • Don’t open up your pitch explaining your client wrote a book. That shouts “commercial” to cynical reporters. Pitch your client as an expert. Subtly bring up later the client wrote a book and ask if the reporter wouldn’t mind mentioning it or if the photographer wouldn’t mind taking a shot of it.
  • Try to connect the client’s subject to an current issue being discussed in society.
  • Tell journalists they can interview clients at a relevant location. If the book is about the work environment, find an employer who will let you use their place as a backdrop. Conference rooms and offices are so boring for interviews!
  • Google your client to ensure the reporter won’t dig up anything negative and surprise everyone with a story you didn’t expect.
  • Give the reporter a few links where readers and viewers can find out more about an author and maybe just buy the book.

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